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Does the introduction explain the objective of the research presented in the preprint?

Yes

Yes the objective of the study was clearly explained in the introduction

Are the methods well-suited for this research?

Somewhat appropriate

Are the conclusions supported by the data?

Highly supported

Are the data presentations, including visualizations, well-suited to represent the data?

Somewhat appropriate and clear

The data visualizations were easy to understand and interpret, though most of the data were written and not visualized.

How clearly do the authors discuss, explain, and interpret their findings and potential next steps for the research?

Very clearly

The study was discussed clearly and in dept.

Is the preprint likely to advance academic knowledge?

Highly likely

Would it benefit from language editing?

No

Would you recommend this preprint to others?

Yes, but it needs to be improved

The result sections, especially data representations and interpretations, need to improve for more clarity

Is it ready for attention from an editor, publisher or broader audience?

Yes, after minor changes

The result and discussion sections

Competing interests

The author declares that they have no competing interests.