- Does the introduction explain the objective of the research presented in the preprint?
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                Yes
              
- Yes the objective of the study was clearly explained in the introduction
- Are the methods well-suited for this research?
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                Somewhat appropriate
              
- Are the conclusions supported by the data?
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                Highly supported
              
- Are the data presentations, including visualizations, well-suited to represent the data?
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                Somewhat appropriate and clear
              
- The data visualizations were easy to understand and interpret, though most of the data were written and not visualized.
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                How clearly do the authors discuss, explain, and interpret their findings and potential next steps for
                the research?
              
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                Very clearly
              
- The study was discussed clearly and in dept.
- Is the preprint likely to advance academic knowledge?
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                Highly likely
              
- Would it benefit from language editing?
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                No
              
- Would you recommend this preprint to others?
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                Yes, but it needs to be improved
              
- The result sections, especially data representations and interpretations, need to improve for more clarity
- Is it ready for attention from an editor, publisher or broader audience?
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                Yes, after minor changes
              
- The result and discussion sections
Competing interests
    The author declares that they have no competing interests.