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Does the introduction explain the objective of the research presented in the preprint?

Partly

Are the methods well-suited for this research?

Somewhat appropriate

Are the conclusions supported by the data?

Somewhat supported

Are the data presentations, including visualizations, well-suited to represent the data?

Somewhat appropriate and clear

How clearly do the authors discuss, explain, and interpret their findings and potential next steps for the research?

Somewhat clearly

Is the preprint likely to advance academic knowledge?

Somewhat likely

Would it benefit from language editing?

Yes

Would you recommend this preprint to others?

Yes, but it needs to be improved

Is it ready for attention from an editor, publisher or broader audience?

No, it needs a major revision

Competing interests

The author declares that they have no competing interests.