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Does the introduction explain the objective of the research presented in the preprint?

Yes

The introduction explains the objective. However, it would be better if the introduction could be shortened.

Are the methods well-suited for this research?

Somewhat appropriate

There is a lack of a control group.

Are the conclusions supported by the data?

Highly supported

Are the data presentations, including visualizations, well-suited to represent the data?

Somewhat appropriate and clear

A graphical representation would be better.

How clearly do the authors discuss, explain, and interpret their findings and potential next steps for the research?

Neither clearly nor unclearly

Is the preprint likely to advance academic knowledge?

Somewhat likely

Would it benefit from language editing?

No

Would you recommend this preprint to others?

Yes, but it needs to be improved

Is it ready for attention from an editor, publisher or broader audience?

Yes, as it is

Competing interests

The author declares that they have no competing interests.