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This study was designed to investigate the effects of gallic acid on the concentrations of selected oxidative stress biomarkers and activities of antioxidant enzymes in the erythrocyte and heart of mice after benzene administration.  The authors conclude that gallic acid protected the heart and erythrocyte against lipid and protein oxidation, and enhanced the antioxidant defense system of mice with benzene.

Major issues

-          In the title, the authors identify that they will examine the effect of gallic acid in Benzene-induced myelotoxicity, however, the myelotoxicity was not investigated all over the study the bone marrow was not investigated.

-          It is not clear why authors chose heart only to assess oxidative stress activity as a result of benzene administration

-          In the introduction section: background on gallic acid’s nature, source, and Pharmacological effects motivate the authors to study its effect. The following references could help:

• Kahkeshani, N., Farzaei, F., Fotouhi, M., Alavi, S. S., Bahramsoltani, R., Naseri, R., Momtaz, S., Abbasabadi, Z., Rahimi, R., Farzaei, M. H., & Bishayee, A. (2019). Pharmacological effects of gallic acid in health and diseases: A mechanistic review. Iranian journal of basic medical sciences, 22(3), 225–237. https://doi.org/10.22038/ijbms.2019.32806.7897.

• Jasemi, S. V., Khazaei, H., Momtaz, S., Farzaei, M. H., & Echeverría, J. (2022). Natural products in the treatment of pulmonary emphysema: Therapeutic effects and mechanisms of action. Phytomedicine, 99, 153988. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.phymed.2022.153988

  -          In the Blood sample collection section: Please identify how the authors collect venous blood samples (retro-orbital, tail vein, or identify your method)

  -          In the Blood sample preparation section: How do the authors separate RBCs from the other cells in the buffy coat and what is the benefit of this preparation (please add reference)

  -          In the Red blood cell lysis section: Please explain if RBC lysis was done by adding lysis buffer to 1 ml of blood or packed RBCs. Please add a reference to the technique

  -          In the Protein concentration section (procedures): Please identify how the authors collected the protein sample in which the protein concentration is measured

  -          In the Catalase (CAT) section (procedures): Please identify the sample in which the catalase is measured

  -          Please explain which protein sample that used to assess Glutathione-S-transferase (GST) So the unit is expressed as mmol of CNDB formed/min/mg protein

  -          In the results section: In all figures, the bar charts are signed with (a, b&c)letters but the authors did not define what these signs mean especially since the control group is also signed. Please revise and explain

  -          The 1st paragraph of the discussion is previously mentioned in the introduction section (repeated data)

Minor issues

-          In the introduction section: Kippen et al., 1988, This reference is not included in the reference section

-          In the Preparation of tissue homogenate section: please add a reference to the technique of preparation of heart tissue homogenate.

-          In the results section: The authors said, “comparing favorably well with ascorbic acid”. Please be more specific by expressing the comparison scientifically

-          In the reference section: the references should be arranged alphabetically

-          Reference 27: is not cited in the article

-          Reference 36: the correct name of the 1st author is Gutteridge

-          Reference 37 is a repetition of reference 18

-          Reference 42 is a repetition of reference 36

Competing interests

The author declares that they have no competing interests.